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About Me Member Editor CupofCloud29/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Months
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Thu Oct 29, 2009, 11:59 AM
Haiku Version:

Two sick little guys
pale little faces snoring
through the afternoon


Original Version:
sick little guys
by ADRIAN MULHOLLAND

my two sick little guys,
one asleep on the floor
one passed out on a mattress,
chicky soup?
handkerchief?
vicks vapor rub?
what can anyone do?
your short little breaths
hide under the covers
with your pale little faces, your sick little noses
dripping under the sheets. what can you do with
some sick little guys?
drink your juice,
eat your vitamins,
let them take
big snoring naps in late afternoons.

  • Listening to: 4pm bedroom ambience
  • Reading: verybadpoetry.com
  • Playing: editor in chief

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:iconzeppeli:
omg, Thanks for the Fav!!! >o<
[ >3<]~:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

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:iconcupofcloud:
Hey now, this has to be the most luscious thank you comment I have ever received for a fav on deviant art. I think this is special. Thank you for being the best ever.
:iconzeppeli:
hueahueahue 8D omg thanks :heart: your response is to the most luscious xD hueahueahue:heart:

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:iconcupofcloud:
Stop stop stop! No, because that reply is even more luscious than mine before that. If it gets anymore luscious around here I'm going to have to wash the sugar off my fingertips and keyboard after I type these blasted comments! Btw, you're still the best ever.
:iconzeppeli:
nyuhuhu uwu
is it really me, being luscious?
;D

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:iconaripideplumb:
Thank you for fav:)

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:iconcupofcloud:
And Hey! Thank you for being special!<3
:iconaripideplumb:
Hey...I'm not special:)

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